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UploaderAnonymous,
TagsBen_10, Ben_Tennyson, Gwen_Tennyson, HornedPariah
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Roflcakes: Oh cool, you're posting again? Haven't seen you round these parts for a while HP.
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Anonymous1: Nice pic but you may want to color it a bit more. You made a few easy mistakes.
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Anonymous2: Seems that youve gotten rusty, try to stay away from side views, theyre too stiff and feels orthographic, Remember 3/4 view is one of the most flattering of views.

Practice here to warm up: http://www.lovecastle.org/draw/

Also remember Hentai is still art. Have your art pieces subject focused Breast, vagina, butt etc. and strangley enough The dick can compliment and hold it together for hetero and gay related fields.

Also work on line weight i assume your using a tablet most of the time. Build up lines to make the shapes that lines represent. Work with a small er brush try 10 pxl or you could just use the pentool which i know you know how to use.

I've seen some of your other stuff and when you get the ball rolling your quality gets better.
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Anonymous3(2): @Anonymous: Thanks alot very helpful! Yeah i havent really been draw too much on the computer i sorta crapped this one out.
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Norton: Actual constructive criticism?

At Paheal?..

Will wonders never cease.
(Great pic by the way)
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lascar: @Anonymous: Ooh a new site! My favorite ones to use is http://www.posemaniacs.com/ and http://www.pixelovely.com/gesture/figuredrawing.php

I'd have to disagree with staying away from the side view. It's just another frame view that can associate/setup a situation for a character(s) or scene.

A Great quote from Scott Mcloud's book "Making Comics" (pg.28-30) http://imgur.com/5SAas :
"Our tale could have been shot from many angles and distances, but offering a view of the action that barely changes the reader is encouraged to focus on what does change, such as the position and attitude of the character, as well as his unchanging forward stance instead of needlessly varying shots, irrelevant to the narrative."

This still applies to just a single panel, but it's all in the definition of what the artist wants to show and how far he/she intends the viewer to associate with the characters and scene. A side view could easily disassociate the viewers making them have a further outside perspective of the characters. Just food for thought. :)

but yeah practice is tantamount! If you need motivation msg me sometime, it's sometimes better to draw with friends then by yourself.
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Anonymous4: This is almost like watching the actual TV show!

Way the go!
MOAR!
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Anonymous5(4): It looks good enough, man. Can't see anything better than this.
Don't know why Anon1 wants to over-do this =/
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Anonymous6: Gift for HentaiPatriarch:
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Anonymous7(6): Well done, man. Well done.
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DigiSim: "Aim lower, doofus."
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Thaumh: This needs captioning...

...or else dialogue bubbles.

Awesome pic though. Certainly better that I could do. :)
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Anonymous8: You rant secks Ben?
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Anonymous9: What's up with Gwen's Teeth?


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