Anonymous2: Meh. I think using more frames and fps would benefit this, and it's obvious you used a frame-adding website, and it makes it all blurry and it's distracting. The animation is stiff (bun not intended), and using less repetitive material would be nice, maybe have it progressively get faster, preparing for the cum? The cum is also very awkward. In real like, semen doesn't move that slow, and doesn't arrive that slowly either, semen comes in pumps of the penis, and in quick small bulks, not in one slow single line. The artstyle isn't the best either, working on anatomy and shading will benefit you. You used the transparent-esk pen, and black shading. I'm not sure if you were going for a "realistic" shading style, but black shading =/ realistic shading. In real life, shadows are black, they're mostly dark versions of close colors. Skin is actually a little transparent irl, meaning most shadows on skin are mostly redish in hue.
Overall, this looks sloppy/lazy and needs a lot of improvement.
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Overall, this looks sloppy/lazy and needs a lot of improvement.