littlemissartiste: A request for an Anon. Thanks! I am happy to take the occasional request as long as they are (mostly) in-line with the criteria and thoughts that I shared in my comments on my previous works. The basis of the request was, in a nutshell, "Lisa in the center of a detention room, being prepared for a flogging by her tutors". (Yes, that is a crop he's holding in the picture, not a tiny golf club)
I felt some apprehension at the thought of Lisa being such a short stature (implying a certain age) and with the implication of being in a class, and so I originally set out to give her a more mature and tall body, but somehow mid-sketch I noticed that, where originally the group was intended to be in the distance a little way (thus Lisa's 'height'), I'd drawn the others much 'closer', and therefore taller. Hm. THe result is a height issue, not an age one. Additionally I tend to draw her either alone or with original characters in keeping with my loose rule about staying in some semblance of authenticity with her character, but I knew when I allowed requests that this was going to happen sooner than later. After all, drawing subjects I wouldn't ordinarily do so was the point of accepting requests!
Minus points first:- Being open with myself, I'm not really too happy with this one. It even started out poorly when I seemed to have lost the ability to draw figures, not to mention how I lost a work file and had to work from a flat image with no layers halfway through as a result. Also the colors look starkly different on my computer screen than on my graphics pad, no matter what settings I tweak. I suppose with all that in mind it actually ended up okay, but anything more than a passing glance may espy that I simply lost my patience toward the end.
Plus points:- Well I wound up with a colorful image with a lot of light and shadow, and I have learned more than a little in the process. That's great, remembering that my venture into R34 is to improve my art!
A quick note here to say this 'might' be the first in a short series. I was rather taken with the original idea and may take it further.
Thank you for looking and, to the one person still reading this, why? Do you know what website you're on?! o.o
Anonymous1: Hey it's me, the one person still reading this. I just really like artist's comments like this and they're really rare in 34 art. It adds more context to the sexiness and that just makes it more sexy to me.
I really like the composition of this one. It's a really sexy scenario, and the use of light and perspective gives it a really different feel than most other Simpsons porn. Also, that look on Miss Hoover's face. Great work!
Anonymous2: - There is not much going on here & Lisa's physique is out of traditional character.
- And although artist's rendering comments are always welcome, I feel that in this case he is way over thinking this effort.
- You have to have a feel for what inspires you to draw the scene & then go with the flow on the canvas then let it go to flutter into the winds of public coment. Good & bad.
- And rule number 1 in art is: "You cant please everbody, at least try to please your self.
192168: @littlemissartiste: This is art. I am not certain what separates most run of the mill pictures from this but I believe it is either the lighting or the way you draw.
Anyway, sadly this picture is unnecessarily flawed. I see many points where there is potential lurking. Take Ms. Krabappel, she is just an surreal blob. She is not even in the tags, even tough she is occupying 1/5 of the picture. Should this deter you? I say, no! What is this blob but a first draft of that that should be in that place? I mean you already showed that you can draw characters, you merely lack the practice to apply.
This goes for everything:
-you have shown that you can draw characters but some of them are still blobs
-you have shown province with lighting, still you lack the practice to utilize it fully
-you shown that you can draw characters in depth, still some of them lack dimensionality (they seem to be 2D cut-outs in a 3D world)
I felt some apprehension at the thought of Lisa being such a short stature (implying a certain age) and with the implication of being in a class, and so I originally set out to give her a more mature and tall body, but somehow mid-sketch I noticed that, where originally the group was intended to be in the distance a little way (thus Lisa's 'height'), I'd drawn the others much 'closer', and therefore taller. Hm. THe result is a height issue, not an age one. Additionally I tend to draw her either alone or with original characters in keeping with my loose rule about staying in some semblance of authenticity with her character, but I knew when I allowed requests that this was going to happen sooner than later. After all, drawing subjects I wouldn't ordinarily do so was the point of accepting requests!
Minus points first:- Being open with myself, I'm not really too happy with this one. It even started out poorly when I seemed to have lost the ability to draw figures, not to mention how I lost a work file and had to work from a flat image with no layers halfway through as a result. Also the colors look starkly different on my computer screen than on my graphics pad, no matter what settings I tweak. I suppose with all that in mind it actually ended up okay, but anything more than a passing glance may espy that I simply lost my patience toward the end.
Plus points:- Well I wound up with a colorful image with a lot of light and shadow, and I have learned more than a little in the process. That's great, remembering that my venture into R34 is to improve my art!
A quick note here to say this 'might' be the first in a short series. I was rather taken with the original idea and may take it further.
Thank you for looking and, to the one person still reading this, why? Do you know what website you're on?! o.o
LMA~
I really like the composition of this one. It's a really sexy scenario, and the use of light and perspective gives it a really different feel than most other Simpsons porn. Also, that look on Miss Hoover's face. Great work!
- And although artist's rendering comments are always welcome, I feel that in this case he is way over thinking this effort.
- You have to have a feel for what inspires you to draw the scene & then go with the flow on the canvas then let it go to flutter into the winds of public coment. Good & bad.
- And rule number 1 in art is: "You cant please everbody, at least try to please your self.
Anyway, sadly this picture is unnecessarily flawed. I see many points where there is potential lurking. Take Ms. Krabappel, she is just an surreal blob. She is not even in the tags, even tough she is occupying 1/5 of the picture. Should this deter you? I say, no! What is this blob but a first draft of that that should be in that place? I mean you already showed that you can draw characters, you merely lack the practice to apply.
This goes for everything:
-you have shown that you can draw characters but some of them are still blobs
-you have shown province with lighting, still you lack the practice to utilize it fully
-you shown that you can draw characters in depth, still some of them lack dimensionality (they seem to be 2D cut-outs in a 3D world)
Lisa: Oh God, please, no !! I was a good student, wasn't I?
Skinner: Yes, too good.