Fortis: @RoflanEbalo: Doesn't look bad at all dude.
On what to improve perhaps: Better lighting does alot for your scene and if you already have a specific camera angle in mind then you can position the models more freely without having to consider every possible point of view because it only has to look good from one camera position. This could help for example with reducing clipping issues and that sort of stuff.
Anonymous1: @RoflanEbalo:
the main complaint I have is you would have to turn the Lipstick mark around. with her sitting on the floor like that there is no real way she could kiss his dick that way. So you would have to rotate it so the top lip of the print would be facing him not her
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On what to improve perhaps: Better lighting does alot for your scene and if you already have a specific camera angle in mind then you can position the models more freely without having to consider every possible point of view because it only has to look good from one camera position. This could help for example with reducing clipping issues and that sort of stuff.
the main complaint I have is you would have to turn the Lipstick mark around. with her sitting on the floor like that there is no real way she could kiss his dick that way. So you would have to rotate it so the top lip of the print would be facing him not her