Anonymous1: Previous page - Anon2's continuation. (Anon1's idea from the comments there is drawn here.)
Also, this is version two of this page. For the sake of ghostwriting note-preservation, the original is archived here.
Anonymous4(2): Alright, I got an idea for future pages, basically Kirby tries different ways to get out and ends up failing in funny ways, like him trying to annoy Dark Taranza by saying poyo really obnoxiously but Dark Taranza shoots a web at his mouth while he's doing it and it goes in and he's like "BLEH" but he can't get it out because web is sticky. Yeah. Kinda crappy story, but I like the humor in previous pages, like the to be continued meme in another page. Yeah, I'll shut up now. Also, kinda want more Bee-spider tits.
Anonymous5(1): Another idea, for how to end it when ready (if not taking a route that uses Copy Essences):
- In a reverse-K:TD, King Dedede crashes the scene (thinking Kirby was the one kidnapped in the first place) (and maybe smashing through the wall or ceiling with their hammer?)...
- ...Wallops Dark Taranza, causing Corrupted!Sectonia to release from her (and Taranza to fly towards the wall)...
- ...Smashes her (from the top-down, flattening/"killing" her, her form immediately disintegrating into Dark Matter particles, which fade from existence)...
- ... And rescues Kirby, sending him out of the webs with a somewhat gentler whack. (Again like Triple Deluxe[/i}.)
- The two reconcile (I'll give you the honor of scripting here), and Dedede carries Kirby back to Dream Land.
Short epilogue, on a different page (if you wish):
- Taranza, dazed after the hammer blow (and unconscious for her possession), weakly says, "But I didn't even attack him... (Neither of us *really* meant to be hostile, anyway...)"
- A voice from off-screen: "It's okay now, Taranza." (A few of the castle fairies/"People of the Sky" [Remember them?] fly into view, caring for her.) "We overheard it all, but spared ourselves from watching. No-one should ever have to be possessed - especially with what Sectonia tried to do to you two."
- One of the fairies flies beside her. "Now, shall we carry you to your chamber?" ("Yes.") Said fairy gains a more sultry look. "And would you like us to... [i]attend to you, while you lie down? (Consensually, of course?) Or do you just want to be left alone?"
- Taranza replies again, "Yes, do that..." - The fairies carry her off - "...we both need to heal after all of this."
Anonymous8(2): @Justadoo444: Wait a second. DeDeDe reconciles with Kirby? I thought he stopped being a douchebag after Revenge of the King. (In my headcanon Super Star Ultra's new content goes after Squeak Squad, while the original sub-games go between DL2 and DL3.)
Anonymous10: @Justadoo444: Wait, Team Kirby Clash Deluxe is canon? I thought is was another theme park thingy Magolor made, or maybe just happens hundreds of years before the main series with all of the characters ancestors or something.
Also, this is version two of this page. For the sake of ghostwriting note-preservation, the original is archived here.
- In a reverse-K:TD, King Dedede crashes the scene (thinking Kirby was the one kidnapped in the first place) (and maybe smashing through the wall or ceiling with their hammer?)...
- ...Wallops Dark Taranza, causing Corrupted!Sectonia to release from her (and Taranza to fly towards the wall)...
- ...Smashes her (from the top-down, flattening/"killing" her, her form immediately disintegrating into Dark Matter particles, which fade from existence)...
- ... And rescues Kirby, sending him out of the webs with a somewhat gentler whack. (Again like Triple Deluxe[/i}.)
- The two reconcile (I'll give you the honor of scripting here), and Dedede carries Kirby back to Dream Land.
Short epilogue, on a different page (if you wish):
- Taranza, dazed after the hammer blow (and unconscious for her possession), weakly says, "But I didn't even attack him... (Neither of us *really* meant to be hostile, anyway...)"
- A voice from off-screen: "It's okay now, Taranza." (A few of the castle fairies/"People of the Sky" [Remember them?] fly into view, caring for her.) "We overheard it all, but spared ourselves from watching. No-one should ever have to be possessed - especially with what Sectonia tried to do to you two."
- One of the fairies flies beside her. "Now, shall we carry you to your chamber?" ("Yes.") Said fairy gains a more sultry look. "And would you like us to... [i]attend to you, while you lie down? (Consensually, of course?) Or do you just want to be left alone?"
- Taranza replies again, "Yes, do that..." - The fairies carry her off - "...we both need to heal after all of this."