No. As it stands, your 'action' is stilted and robotic, the poses are mannequin-esque and the characters are caricatures of themselves. Even the coloration is flat and don't get me started on your overuse of blush or eye reflections.
Keep working at it, you'll get there eventually. But this for money? Eeenope.
Anonymous2: @AnonV3: Not to mention the black text with white outlines on a black bubble. People don't use that for a reason, and it's not because we're racist. It's because when you do shit like that last bubble with tiny text it's almost IMPOSSIBLE to read at a normal resolution. Not to mention the eyestrain that causes with regular sized text.
No. As it stands, your 'action' is stilted and robotic, the poses are mannequin-esque and the characters are caricatures of themselves. Even the coloration is flat and don't get me started on your overuse of blush or eye reflections.
Keep working at it, you'll get there eventually. But this for money? Eeenope.