Great facial expression on star. Bodies are... passable. The show's style is a little bit thinner to make up for them being shorter characters. You might want to work on their hair. Its very jagged and spikey in some places and flat in others. Wet hair is very smooth and conforming, there shouldnt be too many sharp shapes.
You planning on doing any more illustrations of this story? Its one of my faves.
Anonymous3(1): @anon2 its the story "extradimensional besties are the best." Its honestly one of the best/only good SVTFOE smut stories online. http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094848
If you have the time, you should go give the author a positive comment. Donno when theyre gonna continue it, or if they will.
Knullmannen: @Anonymous: Hey thanks :) You're right on point with all the critiques, though I purposefully drew Star a bit more 'developed' for the sake of this being posted on /aco/ at first. Hair is definitely subpar, with that non smooth line on the left side of Star's hair making me most upset right now when re looking.
In terms of making more... possibly. I'm mostly just looking for requests and the like, as well as setting up commissions soon. Follow me on tumblr or soup for regular updates (shameless plug) :P
Great facial expression on star. Bodies are... passable. The show's style is a little bit thinner to make up for them being shorter characters. You might want to work on their hair. Its very jagged and spikey in some places and flat in others. Wet hair is very smooth and conforming, there shouldnt be too many sharp shapes.
You planning on doing any more illustrations of this story? Its one of my faves.
If you have the time, you should go give the author a positive comment. Donno when theyre gonna continue it, or if they will.
In terms of making more... possibly. I'm mostly just looking for requests and the like, as well as setting up commissions soon. Follow me on tumblr or soup for regular updates (shameless plug) :P
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