MoistyThirst: I feel like this test lacks animated "punch" ... not enough motion in Rapunzel's legs, and inadequate feeling of pushing in Flynn's body and legs. Also, Rapunzel could look more petite and youthful if I rework her proportions.
Also, I feel like Rapunzel could have a lot more squishing/bending going on, to give a real dynamic feeling.
So basically, I guess I'm going to rework things. More than just a simple cleanup.
MoistyThirst: @helix: Thanks, so much! It did kind of grow on me after looking at it more, but even so I've started revising it and I'm more satisfied with the revision so far...
MoistyThirst: @Anonymous: I'm probably not going to revisit Super Why any time soon, unless it's for a paid commission. I've got a number of drawing and animation things I'm working on, including SFW stuff. This Rapunzel thing is actually just the first part; someone requested a cum inflation thing and I decided Rapunzel would be a good fit since she's so petite. (In this animation test, I don't think she looks sufficiently petite for the full effect I want.)
I've got a lot more for the Beauty and the Beast fic, and I've got an idea for a POV Honey Lemon/Tadashi animation. (Originally, I was thinking Honey Lemon or the cum inflation request, but Rapunzel's a better fit for that. But I had also thought of Honey Lemon in a POV animation...more subtle and showing her building up to a shuddering orgasm.)
Also, I really do want to at some point do animations of Star Butterfly, Wendy Corduroy, and Daphne Blake (Be Cool Scooby style)...
Anonymous2: this looks great! much simpler motion than your first attempt, now since you've mastered keyframes, your next goal is to work of your in-betweens.
it's gonna take a long time, but once you have a firm grasp of speed, weight and force you should be able to perfect your style.
MoistyThirst: @Anonymous: Thanks! I'm reworking this one to have more "punch" to it, and also in my reworked versions Rapunzel's face is a lot cuter; her proportions are more petite.
But yeah, the way to gain a grasp of speed, weight, and force is to just keep on doing more and more.
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Also, I feel like Rapunzel could have a lot more squishing/bending going on, to give a real dynamic feeling.
So basically, I guess I'm going to rework things. More than just a simple cleanup.
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I find the motion expiration succeeded.
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I've got a lot more for the Beauty and the Beast fic, and I've got an idea for a POV Honey Lemon/Tadashi animation. (Originally, I was thinking Honey Lemon or the cum inflation request, but Rapunzel's a better fit for that. But I had also thought of Honey Lemon in a POV animation...more subtle and showing her building up to a shuddering orgasm.)
Also, I really do want to at some point do animations of Star Butterfly, Wendy Corduroy, and Daphne Blake (Be Cool Scooby style)...
it's gonna take a long time, but once you have a firm grasp of speed, weight and force you should be able to perfect your style.
you're almost there! keep up the great work!
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But yeah, the way to gain a grasp of speed, weight, and force is to just keep on doing more and more.