Slamacow: This animation is pretty terrible. It looks incredibly stiff.
Why is her head popping up instead of forward? How is her arm moving forward, but not her hand? There is no real motion here, it's just jerky unnatural movements and terrible line consistency. It's okay for a first attempt though, I guess.
Anonymous2: The ass-to-dick animation is good! I think it's kinda hard to judge whether her upper body is being pressured down on the floor (top-down-front-up, like) or if it's regular doggystyle. If she's being pressed down in the front her head probably shouldn't move so much, but yeah I agree this is pretty good. Keep at it.
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Why is her head popping up instead of forward? How is her arm moving forward, but not her hand? There is no real motion here, it's just jerky unnatural movements and terrible line consistency. It's okay for a first attempt though, I guess.