gamemkr0: I really like how you did Kick and Brianna's body in the first panel. Especially Kick's. Love how Kick's hands sink into her ass like that. They both have a really good thickness in their bodies as well.
Now for the bad, while generally Kick and Brianna's body are good, both of their right arms are non existent, o just really short. Kick really loses his thickness in the second panel. He also doesn't seem to have a chin there either. Brianna also has a few more problems with her body in the first panel, her lower body and upper don't really look connected, it looks she got separated at the waist and is now watching Kick fuck her. Kick's and Brianna's heads don't look attached in the first panel either like their about to fall off or were broken and reattached at random points in the face.
You should try drawing more bodies from the back to get a sense of where the heads are going to when they turn around to try and look at something. Kick's head could have been better placed, that's really all that's wrong with it, Besides the absence of a neck, which is the art style of the show. If Kick's left hand were in a different position, then it wouldn't look so short. Brianna needs her body attached together again. I suggest always making sure that a pose makes sense from an anatomical choice before continuing to keep going with it. She also needs her left shoulder and the rest of her back in the first panel. Well that's all I got, I'll probably include grammar error fixes in note.
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Now for the bad, while generally Kick and Brianna's body are good, both of their right arms are non existent, o just really short. Kick really loses his thickness in the second panel. He also doesn't seem to have a chin there either. Brianna also has a few more problems with her body in the first panel, her lower body and upper don't really look connected, it looks she got separated at the waist and is now watching Kick fuck her. Kick's and Brianna's heads don't look attached in the first panel either like their about to fall off or were broken and reattached at random points in the face.
You should try drawing more bodies from the back to get a sense of where the heads are going to when they turn around to try and look at something. Kick's head could have been better placed, that's really all that's wrong with it, Besides the absence of a neck, which is the art style of the show. If Kick's left hand were in a different position, then it wouldn't look so short. Brianna needs her body attached together again. I suggest always making sure that a pose makes sense from an anatomical choice before continuing to keep going with it. She also needs her left shoulder and the rest of her back in the first panel. Well that's all I got, I'll probably include grammar error fixes in note.
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more pleas :D