Voslar: I feel a little dirty for doing this since I didn't actually write this story for this pic, but I've got a Flitter / Cloudchaser that I guess I'll shill a little.
bAv-R34: @Roflcakes: However, my one problem is that no matter what happens, the anon in question is 100% okay with every last outrageously lewd act and doesn't even try to fight back or anything.
The Flitter/Cloudchaser threesome pastebin was a fantastic exception because we see that the anon is /not/ okay with doing pones, or at least, he is reluctant at first.
It makes AnonXpone stories that much more interesting because anon gradually gains affection to the pones, rather than having him just go 'OKAY LOL YOU CAN USE ME ALL YOU WANT, WHORSE' with a goofy coked-out grin, which is rather one-note and gets bland quickly.
Roflcakes: @bAv-R34: That's a fair enough point. I don't really have a preference one way or the other, but pones breaking down your shame barriers and forcing themselves on you until you submit is pretty hot.
Voslar: Part of it is the audience I'm going for - I don't have to break down their barriers because that's exactly what they're there for.
Also, the stories are supposed to be second person. Hence, you don't wanna go overboard on telling the reader how they feel about things, else they can't put themselves in the characters' shoes. I might well go overboard on the anon enjoying the attention, and I'll try to dial that back. But the idea is more reinforcement of how I -want- the reader to feel than anything else.
Lastly, the stories are in general supposed to be real short. Even if I'm okay with making them longer, most people won't read 'em if they're more than three or four paragraphs. Every now and then I just say 'fuck it' and make one a good deal longer, but in general, I'm usually more trying to describe a scene than tell a story. Otherwise I lose peoples' attention.
On a side note, this particular story was loosely based on real events from back in high school. One of the hottest girls in the whole goddamn place just strolled up to me one day and started announcing in great detail all the lurid things she wanted to do to me. Unlike the story, however, it ended in me calling bullshit and being correct. The whole thing was an attempted setup for a practical joke at my expense. Still, the memory of how hard she came onto me out of the blue like that seemed too good not to use.
Humans get magically summoned to Equestria and have lots of sex with ponies, who find them impossibly attractive and pretty much cum buckets at so much as the touch of a human.
The catch being it happens against their will (both the summoning and the sex), causes severe brain damage due to magical poisoning, usually kills them, and there's a thriving underground sex trade in poached humans as a result of how addictively good they feel.
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Vos writes the best Human x Pony <3
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The Flitter/Cloudchaser threesome pastebin was a fantastic exception because we see that the anon is /not/ okay with doing pones, or at least, he is reluctant at first.
It makes AnonXpone stories that much more interesting because anon gradually gains affection to the pones, rather than having him just go 'OKAY LOL YOU CAN USE ME ALL YOU WANT, WHORSE' with a goofy coked-out grin, which is rather one-note and gets bland quickly.
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Also, the stories are supposed to be second person. Hence, you don't wanna go overboard on telling the reader how they feel about things, else they can't put themselves in the characters' shoes. I might well go overboard on the anon enjoying the attention, and I'll try to dial that back. But the idea is more reinforcement of how I -want- the reader to feel than anything else.
Lastly, the stories are in general supposed to be real short. Even if I'm okay with making them longer, most people won't read 'em if they're more than three or four paragraphs. Every now and then I just say 'fuck it' and make one a good deal longer, but in general, I'm usually more trying to describe a scene than tell a story. Otherwise I lose peoples' attention.
On a side note, this particular story was loosely based on real events from back in high school. One of the hottest girls in the whole goddamn place just strolled up to me one day and started announcing in great detail all the lurid things she wanted to do to me. Unlike the story, however, it ended in me calling bullshit and being correct. The whole thing was an attempted setup for a practical joke at my expense. Still, the memory of how hard she came onto me out of the blue like that seemed too good not to use.
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/14238/Heat-and-Desire
Humans get magically summoned to Equestria and have lots of sex with ponies, who find them impossibly attractive and pretty much cum buckets at so much as the touch of a human.
The catch being it happens against their will (both the summoning and the sex), causes severe brain damage due to magical poisoning, usually kills them, and there's a thriving underground sex trade in poached humans as a result of how addictively good they feel.
Yeah, it's a little dark. Just a bit.