SpY: @TweedleDee: Well the breasts fallow the motion and gravity. Pretty good job on the areola, it's where suppose to be.
I see you have a problem with feet and hands, quite typical for a beginner.
I see you cropped the unnecessary part of the background from >>1124627, it took some focus from the scene. You could put more work on it though, google "adventure time" and "forest", can even trace some trees if you can't handle it. Most awesome would be http://adventuretime.wikia.com/wiki/File:Forest_of_Trees.JPG (forest have eyes, lol)
The legs should take most of the body weight support, they should NOT swing so freely. Make it so the left one is holding the top branch, right one might hang loose even if she puts so much effort in her work.
You should add a bit more time in the cells, where she fully penetrates herself and near the top. Some emotions would be nice, even if she is a real bitch the ":|" face is kind of turn off.
@Sir_Anon5: You're right, it would be better if the hair was behind the branch.
TweedleDee: I used pencil animation to make this. It just might be my stupid-ass self, but the vector tool was a pain to make the lines look good so I didn't use it. Does anyone know of some other good, free animation software?
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I see you have a problem with feet and hands, quite typical for a beginner.
I see you cropped the unnecessary part of the background from >>1124627, it took some focus from the scene. You could put more work on it though, google "adventure time" and "forest", can even trace some trees if you can't handle it. Most awesome would be http://adventuretime.wikia.com/wiki/File:Forest_of_Trees.JPG (forest have eyes, lol)
The legs should take most of the body weight support, they should NOT swing so freely. Make it so the left one is holding the top branch, right one might hang loose even if she puts so much effort in her work.
You should add a bit more time in the cells, where she fully penetrates herself and near the top. Some emotions would be nice, even if she is a real bitch the ":|" face is kind of turn off.
@Sir_Anon5: You're right, it would be better if the hair was behind the branch.
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As for the image, I like it.