Anonymous3: Something about her expression... throws me a bit. Like she's saying "Aw, Ben, you kidder, always 'forgetting' to pull out. Shucks-buster." Think it's the expression combined with how her left arm is, like she's at the end of one of those "oh you" handwaves.
Nipples also look like they were added on after the fact... everything's a bit rough-edged. Not bad for a quickie two-toner coloring job, but the colors need a bit of work. There's no shadowing on the faces, and it looks like they're boffing on a lit floor with the way the shadows all point-- except for the one on her left elbow, which is in the opposite direction. The internal shot also feels tacked on-- everything else has hard lines (which is what makes the nipples seem a bit out of place, as the outline makes 'em stand out to the viewer), but the internal shot has no hard lines at all, and even seems a bit... blurry.
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Nipples also look like they were added on after the fact... everything's a bit rough-edged. Not bad for a quickie two-toner coloring job, but the colors need a bit of work. There's no shadowing on the faces, and it looks like they're boffing on a lit floor with the way the shadows all point-- except for the one on her left elbow, which is in the opposite direction. The internal shot also feels tacked on-- everything else has hard lines (which is what makes the nipples seem a bit out of place, as the outline makes 'em stand out to the viewer), but the internal shot has no hard lines at all, and even seems a bit... blurry.