Htoonlover: looks nice, except the black areas look a little wonky/odd because of the white hairline thin line around it. i'd say try shading the black instead of doing single fill in color.
Htoonlover: and bring the black all the way to the edges in most areas, including the black framing outside of panel. unless its surrounded by black like here hairbun you might need a white or light color line to separate it.
Anonymous1: this comic don't have a real good finish, I don't even painted her hair and dress, they were already like that, but I'll try to improve it anyway
Htoonlover: yeah, now that i look at it, i see what you mean, after looking at the originals. the reason it looks weird is because the 'colors' go all the way to the line edges, but the black alone has the white separations. which makes it look not-compatible with the rest. and it stands out alot. the exterior edges of the black areas in-particular would look better if they were colored to the edges, and fix the visual problem. you could probably leave the thin white lines on the edges of the 'reflection' areas, as it might actually look better with them extra while lines, though i'm not sure. you could test it, try both and see which looks more natural. i'm just giving honest constructive criticism, and advice to improve it. its still better than i could do.
Anonymous5(3): Who then hell still calls their mother 'mother'? Especially when you're fucking your mother, Doesn't everyone say mom or mum or ma or shit like that.
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