Anonymous1: I think it's mostly that the bump of the cheek is too far down. Instead of the indent before the cheek bulges out looking like the indent for the eyes (like it should) it looks like some kind of concave space in her face below the eyes.
Also, the neck starts too far into the face instead of right below the ears.
Also, the neck starts too far into the face instead of right below the ears.
That's my critique on it, anyways.