iFap2Dat: It's a good honest effort. The more you try, the better you'll get. If I may offer a criticism: the black around her eyes is distractingly thick.
Dr-Cane: yeah, not bad, also try a smaller nose, and if you are going to draw eyes with a dark border, try with a darker version of the color you are using for the eye itself, this can be also applied to the pupil, a darker green in this case, also, if you are going to add some shine to the eyes, it's a good idea to place it above the whole eye (not only in the color in question) finally maybe adding it with a 80% of it's opacity and a little blurred
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