Jasra: Edit of my pic. Redid the right hand and vagina. I think it looks better than the other one, hopefully you do to. Rest of the pic is pretty much unchanged. I haven't learned any new tricks in the last few days, heh.
Jasra: Heh. I don't let them bother me too much. If you're even too chicken shit to make a username then why should I give a flying fuck what you think ? Post some of your own shit to show me how good YOU are then anon2. It's amazing how bold the internet makes people. They have so much security hiding behind that screen and keyboard. I'd really love to see them be so crass to my face. Or to anybody else they criticize so idiotically. 98% of the time they'd bitch up in a heartbeat.
I did say this the first time I posted this pic, but forgot to say it this time: This is my FIRST try at hentai. And pretty much my first try at coloring with the computer. Considering I only used gimp and my mouse to do it, I think it at least ranks an 'okay' rating.
Spare me your negative ass feedback in the future. But I'm more than happy to accept constructive criticism.
Anonymous3(2): lol@making fun of posting as anon. welcome to 4chan you dumb fucker we all post as anon.
also lol@lets see you do better. I don't have to have written and directed a full feature length movie to be able to say a certain movie is garbage, and I don't have to have a portfolio in my hands in order to tell you, you draw like a 12 year old.
also lol@excuses, as if that justifies the shittiness.
If you're going to act like a high and mighty bitch, go to wwoec or hentaipalm or wherever, where they ban for calling you out on your faggotry, and cocksucking is enforced by gun point.
This shit isn't worth criticism, but fine. The lines are god damn terrible, do you have a twitch or some shit? If the line is crooked, GO BACK AND FIX IT, don't just keep on going saying 'oh well, it's my first pic, lol'. your linework is the foundation of the drawing, you can't build a house on a broken foundation, any imperfection will only be magnified later on, you should be spending most of your time on the initial sketch. The proportions are just beyond terrible. Did you even draw a skeleton? Go read andrew loomis's figure drawing or SOMETHING, you clearly have no concept of the human body. And what the fuck is wrong with the head? It's all blocky and misshapen like she was beaten to death with a rolling pin. Can you not see this? The vagina looks like the fucking Eye of Sauron. That hand is just complete fuck. Are you not aware of knuckles? The coloring is just flat and shitty, learn to shade black and white before you attempt coloring, that should be an obvious fact. Again, learn anatomy, this is not only important for linework but also for coloring. Knowing how each part of the body is shaped is crucial in creating a believable character in three dimensions. But really alot of this stuff should be obvious. But if you've proven anything it's that you were not gifted with common sense. Ok, moving on, you need to learn where lines should end and colors or shading begins. Don't outline the nipples, that looks terrible. Use shading or coloring for the nipples. That goes for things like lips too, if you ever find yourself drawing them. Overall everything just looks FLAT. You need to learn to give things depth. My advice would be to stop trying to draw shitty porn and start from the basics. See that half empty can of coca cola sitting on your desk. Draw it. Spend an hour hour drawing it. Done? Good. Delete it. Now draw it again, this time spend 3 hours. Pick random objects, a crumpled paper bag from burger king. A plant. Your hand. Currently you're fucking terrible in every regard of the word, the sooner you realize this the sooner you can really start learning. As a starting artist if you don't feel the urge to burn every piece of work you've created, there's something wrong with your thought process.
Jasra: Now see, at least you actually added some constructive criticism that time. Albeit still in a very assholeish fashion. Is it really necessary to do it like that ? What makes you such an angry fucker ?
Can I not see that it needs work ? Of course it does, I never said it was perfect. Does it being my first pic excuse the mistakes or imperfections ? No, but a small bit of leeway is in order. The lines, I've only my mouse to trace the sketch, I don't have a wacom tablet or something similar. Yet. Coloring and shading, yes I'm well aware I'm terrible at it. Am I ever truly satified with ANYTHING that I draw ? No, I'm not.
Chill the fuck out in the future, and leave all the negative shit at the door. Is it really that hard to just criticize peacefully ? Goddamn.
Diosoth: Jasra: people feel a need to be jerks when their name is hidden. Seems to go with the territory of these places. It's why you never see such comments on deviantART, Furaffinity, etc. They can't say it if you know who they are, ruins the fun.
Jasra: I guess. Just see no point to it. No reason to be that angry. It's not as if somebody forced them to look at it.
They should just pop in and have a look. Leave a simple non-flammatory comment such as, "Eh, it needs some work man, keep trying."
Or the long winded criticism is welcome as well, minus all the flames. Like I said, something about being hidden behind that screen that emboldens people to assholes.
Anyway, working on a new drawing. Same pose and character, just reworking it so the proportions match a little better. I'll delete this one when I've finished coloring it.
"but yeah unless your work is like Gunsmokes chances are you gonna get trolled/bitched at"
I understand what you're saying, but that's a little unbalanced for anybody to think that way. He's been drawing for what, over a year now ? I'm sure he has a tablet, photoshop, and any other number of neat tools to work with. Maybe some art classes under his belt as well, I don't know. How could I, or any other beginner artist, be expected to compare to a vet ? Silly if you even give it a modicrum of thought.
Anonymous8: Jasra, you said "lets see where I am in a year" or something along those lines, and now you haven't posted anything since 2009. I saw real potential here, too bad you didn't keep going :/
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i wish i could color like this.
I did say this the first time I posted this pic, but forgot to say it this time: This is my FIRST try at hentai. And pretty much my first try at coloring with the computer. Considering I only used gimp and my mouse to do it, I think it at least ranks an 'okay' rating.
Spare me your negative ass feedback in the future. But I'm more than happy to accept constructive criticism.
also lol@lets see you do better. I don't have to have written and directed a full feature length movie to be able to say a certain movie is garbage, and I don't have to have a portfolio in my hands in order to tell you, you draw like a 12 year old.
also lol@excuses, as if that justifies the shittiness.
If you're going to act like a high and mighty bitch, go to wwoec or hentaipalm or wherever, where they ban for calling you out on your faggotry, and cocksucking is enforced by gun point.
This shit isn't worth criticism, but fine. The lines are god damn terrible, do you have a twitch or some shit? If the line is crooked, GO BACK AND FIX IT, don't just keep on going saying 'oh well, it's my first pic, lol'. your linework is the foundation of the drawing, you can't build a house on a broken foundation, any imperfection will only be magnified later on, you should be spending most of your time on the initial sketch. The proportions are just beyond terrible. Did you even draw a skeleton? Go read andrew loomis's figure drawing or SOMETHING, you clearly have no concept of the human body. And what the fuck is wrong with the head? It's all blocky and misshapen like she was beaten to death with a rolling pin. Can you not see this? The vagina looks like the fucking Eye of Sauron. That hand is just complete fuck. Are you not aware of knuckles? The coloring is just flat and shitty, learn to shade black and white before you attempt coloring, that should be an obvious fact. Again, learn anatomy, this is not only important for linework but also for coloring. Knowing how each part of the body is shaped is crucial in creating a believable character in three dimensions. But really alot of this stuff should be obvious. But if you've proven anything it's that you were not gifted with common sense. Ok, moving on, you need to learn where lines should end and colors or shading begins. Don't outline the nipples, that looks terrible. Use shading or coloring for the nipples. That goes for things like lips too, if you ever find yourself drawing them. Overall everything just looks FLAT. You need to learn to give things depth. My advice would be to stop trying to draw shitty porn and start from the basics. See that half empty can of coca cola sitting on your desk. Draw it. Spend an hour hour drawing it. Done? Good. Delete it. Now draw it again, this time spend 3 hours. Pick random objects, a crumpled paper bag from burger king. A plant. Your hand. Currently you're fucking terrible in every regard of the word, the sooner you realize this the sooner you can really start learning. As a starting artist if you don't feel the urge to burn every piece of work you've created, there's something wrong with your thought process.
Can I not see that it needs work ? Of course it does, I never said it was perfect. Does it being my first pic excuse the mistakes or imperfections ? No, but a small bit of leeway is in order. The lines, I've only my mouse to trace the sketch, I don't have a wacom tablet or something similar. Yet. Coloring and shading, yes I'm well aware I'm terrible at it. Am I ever truly satified with ANYTHING that I draw ? No, I'm not.
Chill the fuck out in the future, and leave all the negative shit at the door. Is it really that hard to just criticize peacefully ? Goddamn.
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They should just pop in and have a look. Leave a simple non-flammatory comment such as, "Eh, it needs some work man, keep trying."
Or the long winded criticism is welcome as well, minus all the flames. Like I said, something about being hidden behind that screen that emboldens people to assholes.
Anyway, working on a new drawing. Same pose and character, just reworking it so the proportions match a little better. I'll delete this one when I've finished coloring it.
"but yeah unless your work is like Gunsmokes chances are you gonna get trolled/bitched at"
I understand what you're saying, but that's a little unbalanced for anybody to think that way. He's been drawing for what, over a year now ? I'm sure he has a tablet, photoshop, and any other number of neat tools to work with. Maybe some art classes under his belt as well, I don't know. How could I, or any other beginner artist, be expected to compare to a vet ? Silly if you even give it a modicrum of thought.