Anonymous3: Very nicely done! The environment is very well done, set with great lighting and shadow casting. That really made it easy to see, and made my whole experience better. The animation is almost completely fluid and that is wonderful - Especially the knock-knees at the end when he extracts his fist from her. That's a very nice touch.
The only posing errors I can see are her ponytail clipping with her body (think it has bones), his left hand clipping through her ass cheek between the first and second seconds, his baton clipping into him between the 15 and 16th seconds, and her right hand clipping into the wall for the majority of the animation.
I find it an interesting choice how none of the jiggle bones on her body are used. Personally, I think breast jiggle would be better than no breast jiggle, but butt jiggle would also be a nice touch.
I believe that at some points during the fisting, his arm is deep enough that the angle of her pelvis should be affected by the angle of his arm, or his arm angle should match her pelvis angle, but that may be because I don't know how deep his arm is.
I understand the model limitations causing problems around her right wrist and shoulder, torquing her skin in ways that aren't possible. Are there any workaround measures? Don't know if it would affect anything, but rotating the right clavicle?
Honestly though, this is a great animation, and the problems I brought up can easily be brushed aside because you've done very well with this, from what I can see. I just want to help you get better if I can because everyone wins.
The only posing errors I can see are her ponytail clipping with her body (think it has bones), his left hand clipping through her ass cheek between the first and second seconds, his baton clipping into him between the 15 and 16th seconds, and her right hand clipping into the wall for the majority of the animation.
I find it an interesting choice how none of the jiggle bones on her body are used. Personally, I think breast jiggle would be better than no breast jiggle, but butt jiggle would also be a nice touch.
I believe that at some points during the fisting, his arm is deep enough that the angle of her pelvis should be affected by the angle of his arm, or his arm angle should match her pelvis angle, but that may be because I don't know how deep his arm is.
I understand the model limitations causing problems around her right wrist and shoulder, torquing her skin in ways that aren't possible. Are there any workaround measures? Don't know if it would affect anything, but rotating the right clavicle?
Honestly though, this is a great animation, and the problems I brought up can easily be brushed aside because you've done very well with this, from what I can see. I just want to help you get better if I can because everyone wins.