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traffik: Ugh, what bad writing. All those useless little 'asides' make the text way too cluttered and keep the dialogue from flowing realistically. I get the feeling that most of them are supposed to be thoughts, but it's hard to tell when the dialogue isn't encased by speech/thought bubbles, and both spoken words and internal thoughts have lines going to them. So the appearance is that they literally keep stopping the conversation every two seconds to go off on a tangent, which makes you want to punch both of them.
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