Anonymous4: I think its pretty good to be honest. there is one thing I have noticed about interent critisism. Most people who dont draw 9Or do what ever they are critisizing) are the ones who says it suckswhere as the experts arwe the onews who says "it's good but needs work" or "It could be better but good try man" or soemthing to that extent. What does that say to those posers hmm? 9Forgive my spelling amd typos).
Anonymous6: Stop bawwing the a1-3 didn't say it was crap asshats. They said it could be better. It is the same with all art. Unless you are a great artist and you want to do 34 work in your spare time between making works of art for musuems. Toph does looked freaked out in this picture. They don't look like plastic in my opinion though. The lighting could be better done. I will admit that it is way better than any stick figure I can only do
Anonymous7: Yeah...highlights are somewhat strangely positioned...especially on Katara's face (looks like she's crying) and her right tit (should that even be highlighted ?)
Anonymous9: hmm... Seems very good. Even their expressions seem QUITE genuine, even alive.
But I noticed that Toph's feet seem a bit shallow. By that I mean that some minor details are needed around the balls of her feet, and ankles. I also have a feeling that her lower back should be arched, to keep the flow between her shoulders and hips consistant (or else it looks like someone has disconnected her pelvis and put it on a jack). Lastly, there should be a line between her pussy and legs (it's like she's missing her lower belly).
Apart from those things THIS is a good piece of work. Keep practicing and drawing.
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million times better than my first try on drawing pics on pc..
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...anyhow -it's a great pic for an early try.
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happy wikid?
now quit whinefagging.
But I noticed that Toph's feet seem a bit shallow. By that I mean that some minor details are needed around the balls of her feet, and ankles. I also have a feeling that her lower back should be arched, to keep the flow between her shoulders and hips consistant (or else it looks like someone has disconnected her pelvis and put it on a jack). Lastly, there should be a line between her pussy and legs (it's like she's missing her lower belly).
Apart from those things THIS is a good piece of work. Keep practicing and drawing.
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