habari: After attempting to submit alternate versions of my previous 'After a long day' image to another site, I received a rejection notice with the critique that the pose didn't suggest enough weight for the character. I altered the pose to improve the appearance of her laying fully down on the sleeping mat. The shadows under the character now show no lack of contact between her body and the mat, and she is in a more relaxed pose. I also took the feedback about her boots into consideration. So now she took off her boots and bracers (the most restrictive articles of clothing) before falling asleep.
Any feedback? I think the critique was correct, now that I look at this image compared to my previous one.
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Any feedback? I think the critique was correct, now that I look at this image compared to my previous one.
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