I_Heart_Hanabi: The biggest issue with your art is the breasts. You should trace other works to try to replicate them. I've seen hentai tits that I'd suck on in a heartbeat if presented to me. I like how true to form the rest of the art is. You have potential to be an awesome H-artist.
I_Heart_Hanabi: No matter where you look, even pros mess up hands and feet. I think most of us willfully avoid looking there unless it's like a foot fetishist pic. For hands you should curl your fingers and get the length of each segment and approximate it with your drawings. That'll get the fingers which is the biggest issue with the hands.
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