Anonymous1: Alright then.
Lines are messy, you probably used very rough paper.
Her left hip (right hip on the pic) looks like it's attached somewhere behind the back, because the belly line cuts it off. You should make the hip line continue a bit more and cut off the belly line instead. The butt is too flat, instead of one line you should define each buttock with two separate lines. I'd say the mane needs a bit more volume, because as it is it makes her look slightly bald but aside from that the face is okay. Work on upper hooves, too.
Overall not so great but not completely terrible either. Would have been MUCH better if the lines were cleaner.
Been drawing long? Do you freehand or build up the shape with some sketching first? You have potential, with some more practice I believe you could get quite decent.
Next time don't forget to rotate the picture to the intended side, and preferably resize to about half of this size. And please tag properly, too. The series title is obligatory, I almost missed this pic because it's only tagged with the character's name.
Anonymous2: Thanks for the feed back. It really helps. Honestly I just sketched this, and I only spent about 2 minutes on it. So it's not my best work.
Lines are messy, you probably used very rough paper.
Her left hip (right hip on the pic) looks like it's attached somewhere behind the back, because the belly line cuts it off. You should make the hip line continue a bit more and cut off the belly line instead. The butt is too flat, instead of one line you should define each buttock with two separate lines. I'd say the mane needs a bit more volume, because as it is it makes her look slightly bald but aside from that the face is okay. Work on upper hooves, too.
Overall not so great but not completely terrible either. Would have been MUCH better if the lines were cleaner.
Been drawing long? Do you freehand or build up the shape with some sketching first? You have potential, with some more practice I believe you could get quite decent.
Next time don't forget to rotate the picture to the intended side, and preferably resize to about half of this size. And please tag properly, too. The series title is obligatory, I almost missed this pic because it's only tagged with the character's name.
Good luck.
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Maybe I'll colour it if I stop being lazy